Jan Dvorak - Revision history

BDH-015 at 04:12, 8 November 2018

2018-11-08T04:12:50Z

CUR-003 at 22:57, 12 August 2016

2016-08-12T22:57:54Z

CUR-003 at 22:55, 12 August 2016

2016-08-12T22:55:17Z

CUR-003 at 01:10, 31 March 2016

2016-03-31T01:10:33Z

CUR-003: /* Overview */

2016-03-31T01:09:39Z

‎Overview

BCN-001: /* Allies */

2015-10-05T17:58:50Z

‎Allies

CUR-003: /* Rumors */

2015-05-26T01:29:17Z

‎Rumors

CUR-003 at 02:34, 12 May 2015

2015-05-12T02:34:29Z

CUR-003 at 02:33, 12 May 2015

2015-05-12T02:33:18Z

CUR-003: /* Allies */

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‎Allies

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 Devoted by [[Victor Augusto Gentil]], former Prince of Curitiba.<br>
 Distinguished by [[Gabriel Wesson Yves Lawrence]], Harpy of Sorocaba.<br>
 Empowered, positional status.<br>
 Feared, positional status.<br>
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 Dedicado por [[Victor Augusto Gentil]], Antigo Príncipe de Curitiba.<br>
 Distinto por [[Gabriel Wesson Yves Lawrence]], Harpia de Sorocaba.<br>
 Encarregado pelo cargo que ocupa.<br>
 Temido pelo cargo que ocupa.<br>

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 Empowered, positional status.<br>
 Feared, positional status.<br>
 Reconhecido por [[Vasillii Ivanov]], Príncipe de Yekaterinburgo.<br>
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 Encarregado pelo cargo que ocupa.<br>
 Temido pelo cargo que ocupa.<br>
 <h2>Character Information</h2>

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 [[João Caneca]], Brujah from [http://camarilla.owbn.net/index.php?title=Category:Domain:Pirenópolis,_Brazil Pirenópolis].<br>
 [[Joaquim Manoel Carneiro da Cunha]], Prince of João Pessoa.<br>
-[[Luigi Falcone]], Prince of Vale do Itajaí.
+[[Luigi Falcone]], Prince of Litoral Catarinense.
 [[Amélia Nolleto]] (desaparecida), Primógena de [http://camarilla.owbn.net/index.php?title=Category:Domain:Pernambuco,_Brazil Recife].<br>
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 [[João Caneca]], Brujah de [http://camarilla.owbn.net/index.php?title=Category:Domain:Pirenópolis,_Brazil Pirenópolis]<br>
 [[Joaquim Manoel Carneiro da Cunha]], Príncipe de João Pessoa.<br>
-[[Luigi Falcone]], Príncipe do Vale do Itajaí.
+[[Luigi Falcone]], Príncipe do Litoral Catarinense.
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 Rumors say that one of the mouths in the body of Priscus [http://sabbat.owbn.net/wiki/index.php?title=Sacha_Vykos Sascha Vykos] belonged to Jan.<br>
 Was on the battlefield in João Pessoa, facing Patrick de Laman, to get a sword named "Blade of Troile". A few nigths after the battle was seen in Praga.<br>
-Since Patrick de Laman (one of the oldest Brujah in Brazil) has proven to be an infernalist, Jan Dvorak searched to combat him. On the night of Patrick's destruction the  dagger used to kill him was delivered to the Tremere by the hands of Malkavians.
+Since Patrick de Laman (one of the oldest Brujah in Brazil) presented himself as an infernalist, Jan Dvorak tried to face him. On the night of Patrick's destruction the  dagger used to kill him was delivered to the Tremere by the hands of Malkavians.
 Foi envolvido na destruição do Antigo Príncipe [[Alvar Cabeza de Vaca]] de Curitiba. <br>
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 Dizem que umas das bocas no corpo da Priscus [http://sabbat.owbn.net/wiki/index.php?title=Sacha_Vykos Sascha Vykos] pertencia ao Jan.<br>
 Esteve no campo de batalha em João Pessoa, enfrentando Patrick de Laman, a fim de pegar uma espeda chamada "Lâmina de Troile". Algumas noites após a batalha foi visto em Praga.<br>
-Desde que Patrick de Laman (um dos Brujah mais velhos do Brasil) revelou-se um infernalista Jan Dvorak procurou combatê-lo. Na noite de sua destruição a adaga que o destruiu foi entregue aos Tremere pelas mãos de Malkavianos.
+Desde que Patrick de Laman (um dos Brujah mais velhos do Brasil) revelou-se um infernalista Jan Dvorak procurou enfrentá-lo. Na noite de sua destruição a adaga que o destruiu foi entregue aos Tremere pelas mãos de Malkavianos.